Vania formal letter´s correction!!!

Dear minister of transport,
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I am Vania Flores and I think that (x) me (and) 1.800.000 people in Santiago are upset because of the transportation system. I agree that there are many buses on the street, but (x) only in downtown.Actually p in Places far from Santiago city like, p San Bernardo, Nos, Buin and Paine Transiantiago Sp is awful. I have to walk, p 30 minutes from my home to the bus stop, p then p I have to wait a lot, because only 1 bus past f over the street. So p I have to wait or (x) take a taxi, but that is really expensive and I can't afford it.Before I take the bus I have to walk to take another bus or take the subway. When I take another bus I have (x) an hour else traveling Sp . But, if I take the subway p I have 30 minutes in a line on the station and then 30 minutes in the carriage. It’s a mess; I have to spend 2 hours in the morning and 2 and a half in the afternoon, because I have to form lines for everything.
I think that when you ww implemented the new system you ww should keep t the old buses, but change f the pay form.This new transportation system has change t people's life in a negative way. We are more irritable and aggressive, because we are always late.So, we need changes, because we don't have money to buy a car, (so) the new highways doesn't t work for those who use busses. We need a decent transportation system.I hope you can understand my problem and think about the solution.

Sincerely,Vania Flores Venegas.